A poem for some buddies. Comments? Critiques?

Always a fan o' the limerick, y'done well with this, even though I've been absent s'long I've no idea what ever'body else is talkin' 'bout! LMBO We talkin' RL meetup?!? We used to do that about a dozen times a year...all over US/Canada...a group of reg'lars from Lycos Chat! Was cool, but can dispel some illusions purty quickly! LOL